Jumat, 22 Mei 2009

MY UNFORGETABLLE MOMENT

My unforgettable life's moment is when i lost my wallet. That happened on saturday night,february,1 st 2009. That night after waching movie film with my girl friend, i stopped once to buy some drinks in Kupang. After i paid, i give my wallet to one's of my girl friend.But it in to my helmet, when i was wearing my helmet i didn't know if my wallet is inside it.when we were i our way, i asked my wallet to my friend that i given it, but he said that the wallet was in my helmet. I stoped a bit to check my helmet, but i didn't find it. Then i went to the place i bought drinks to try to find it. I asked every people in there if they knew where my wallet is

After i was looking for it, i was surrender and went back from the place.My friend told me to go to the nearest police station, and give a report that i lost my wallet. UNfortunetely, the report that i want to make can't be realize because i lack of one's important card. Finally, i decided to take my friend to his home. In there, i told my experience to my friends parent, they only said "you must be patient".

After from my friends home, i was scare to go to home because of my parent's anger, eventhough one's of missing card was my aunt's. When i was at my home, i feel scared, and thought now to give a reason to my aunt. On the morning, i decided to speak to my aunt. She asked whay that things can happened, then i told everything to her. i also told her to don't let my other family knew, but in the afternoon my parents called and ordered me to go to home. When i was home my parents scolded me and as the result i wasn't allowed to go to home than 21:00 pm for a week.

After that, i was more carefullto take care everythings, I needand make me feel quilty to my aunt for losing the card. And for for the next the weeks , i was scared to ride my motor cycle because i didn't have my driving licinse. Thatwas a lesson for me

7 komentar:

  1. i think your paragraphs is good


    But i still found many mistakes there,especially about grammar.
    Such as: "waching" should be "watched"
    and many of words in your writing..

    I hope you can do better on next project..

    BalasHapus
  2. I think your paragraph is great...

    But you can edit Subject with capital word

    And you must put fullstop (.) in the end sentences.

    BalasHapus
  3. Hi...Rudi,,

    i think your paragraph is good enough even you made some mistake on your writing....
    be careful on write a vocabulary,,,because it will be misunderstanding if you write on wrong vocab.....

    that's all my comment

    thank's....:)

    BalasHapus
  4. Wildania(120810477G)
    your paragraph is good!
    your grammer is enough!

    BalasHapus
  5. your writing is order,..

    but,.you not focus in your paragraph,.

    elok 120810486G

    BalasHapus
  6. Hi rudi..
    Thanks for give comment in my blog,,

    Hmm.. I think your paragraph is good enough.
    But there are a lot of mistakes that you make in your paragraph.

    "That night after waching movie film with.."
    I think you should write, That night after watched movie with... "

    I think you should change your paragraph with good words,because i can't understand with your story.
    Check your grammar too.

    Thanks..

    Pratiwi Ramandita 120810487G

    BalasHapus
  7. Hy rudy.....

    I think your paragraph is good enough....
    But I still look some mistakes in your paragraph...
    So you must be carefull again in your writing...

    That's all...


    give me your comment in my blog..
    Thanks b4...

    By:Ria Anggraini.S
    120810492G

    BalasHapus