Indonesian election as the host of world cup 2020 has caused so many pros and cros. there are some people supporting and also there are not about indonesian successment if it will be the host world cup 2020. we can think about the highest hopes of our nation from those arguments.world cup is a big event holding once every four years.all attentions of every football holic will concentrate to this event.So every opinion,activity and atention will be a honour on world or football.
Every preparetion must be done by PSSI,from all materials including stadium,hotels,tourist objects and all equipment buhich must be a long world cup.But in the fact until 2009,these preparations are still less satisfy then other country like malaysia or singapura has done.Indonesia is still one level lower then them,there are stiil some stadiums which are a bandoned so it needs a lot of works and funds to build indonesia as a host of world cup 2022.
Not only the materials but also every civilization element who must learn about adulty,on every things that they do.so there wont be any individual struggle,but there will be united struggle. Indonesian will be embarased if there is any mass mess will happen there.So itneeds extra attention from goverment and PSSI to handle any mess that will happen.
Our country hope must be supported by us,which are to be done for the best of our country football is one of an efford to build back our nation glory in the eye of other countries in the world. hopefully indonesian dream to be the host of world cup 2020 can be realized
Selasa, 16 Juni 2009
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I think your paragraph is good enough
BalasHapusbut you can edit some words
atention with attention
honour with honor
a honor with an honor
preparetion with preparation
stiil with still
who with that
every things with everything
embarased with embarrassed
your writing is enough,.
BalasHapusbut,.you not focus,.in your writing
your grammar is enough too,.
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By : Yulia Primita Sari (120810494G)
BalasHapus- I think your paragraph is good enough, but I find some mistakes in your grammar I think, although I know a little about it.
- Your Paragraph is not focus, so you have to change it becomes good paragraph.
Thank you for your comment before.....
hi rudy ..
BalasHapusi think your paragraph is good enough ..
but i found little bit mistake in your paragraph ..
you have to repair your sentences ..
thats all ..
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hi....rudi
BalasHapusi think your paragraph is good enough,,but you're not focus on your opinion,,,,that's too long for opinion....
keep your grammar and vocabulary balancing,,,
thanks for your comment too....
karina 120810476G
hi ..
BalasHapusithink your paragraph is good .
but i found some mistakes ..
be careful with your grammar and vocabulary ..
you are not focus in the topic too ..
keep in good writing ..
Ranti P. Nastiti
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hi rudi..
BalasHapusyour topic so heavy, and you not focus to argue.
i hope you can do better next time.
hy rudy. . . .
BalasHapusi think your paragraph is good enough, but you not focus. . and so many mistake word . .. .
maybe you can repair it next time. .
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hay rudy rhoma...
BalasHapushe...9x
i think your writing quite good but isn't focus and i found some mistakes on your writing
maybe you should write better than this latter
kurnia suci (120810488G)
Hy rudy....
BalasHapusI think your paragraph not focus
So you must change it becomes good paragraph...
And i still found some mistakes on your writing....
That's all...
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