Kamis, 16 April 2009

EAST JAVA

East java is a beutifull province .In east java there are many atractive places so it becomes one of wonderfull province.Many people love it, tourists from abroard or just a local tourists,all love east java. The multicultural,ethnic any many kinds of animal species make people like to stay or have a holiday in east java . iT also has very beutifull nature scenery ,because east java has a lot of vulcanic mounts. That makes the land becomes so fertile.
Jatim Park is a one some amusement places in east java. There are a lot of interisting game there. It’s very crowded in holiday. Jatim Park lies in Batu City Malang east java. It’s on the valley of montain so the scenery is so beautifull. The air is also fresh than can make people want to stay a longthere. There are also swimming pools. In Jatim Park which arounded by big statues which able to fall water from it’s mounth. We will not only able to play the games or just swimming but also there are studying corner for kids and adult which is preserving with interisting method, that canmake them want to study in long time. There is also a museum which save many kinds of hystoric things a still taket care as well
East java, has many amazing waterfall, one of the example is avaible in Mojokerto and the name is Pacet Waterfall. There are many high tress. And the air is si fresh, In Pacet there is not only waterfall,but also swimming pool and water iscreation. That can be used by al people who visit there. There is ever hot water recreation and used by people to theraphy diseas. Such us reumatic, and refreshing mind and etc
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4 komentar:

  1. ria anggraini18 April 2009 pukul 22.54

    Hello rudi..
    I think your writing is good enough!!!
    Because your writing not focus with one of tourism place....
    In your writing there are some place of tourism
    So be careful!!!

    Thats all....
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  2. Rulyana19 April 2009 pukul 02.11

    Hey Rudy..

    Now, let me to give you a comment..

    Well,,,
    I think there are still many mistakes in your writing..
    Ex:
    -tourist from abroad (it should be "foreign tourists"

    -Jatim Park lies in Batu..(what is the meaning????) it should be "Jatim Park is in Batu", right?

    -And besides that you forget to take "es" and "s" in plural words.

    Our lecturer asked to us to make 3 paragraphs in our writing, but Why did you make just a paragraph????


    Actually, Your writing is not too bad,,it's good enough.
    Because I can understand what you explained about Jatim Park.

    But someday, you should be more careful in writing, ok?

    That's all..

    Commented by : Rulyana (120810493 G)

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  3. nadhira19 April 2009 pukul 22.54

    hi rudi, i want to give you some comments about your writing.

    i think there are some mistakes in your paragraph. like in first sentence in word beutifull, you should type 'beautiful".

    and you not especially describe about east java, i think you too much describe about jatim park.

    and why you just write only a paragraph??

    that's my comment for you, hopely you can do it better next time.

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  4. Rico20 April 2009 pukul 04.12

    hey Rudy i think so many mistake at word which you write. .

    - beutifull : beatiful
    - atractive : attractive
    - interisting : interesting
    - montain : mountain

    why you just only write one paragraph????????

    be carefull okey. . .


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